This is a two sided topic for me. Having PE class has goods and bads. For starters PE teachers push the whole class to exercise to a degree where some kids might not be able to keep up. Therefore your final marks will not only be based how hard you work but more of how healthy you are. Since all students are at a different physical states than others, marking students on their physical performance isn't very accurate.
That is the down side of PE class. I also think PE is really important because it keeps kids healthy and teaches them how to become healthier. If there was no PE class then kids would be less healthy and would be discouraged from becoming healthier. With PE class in school kids are forced to exercise while at home kids probably wouldn't. Plus PE class brings a little competition to the game. That definitely will make them work harder. Anyways over-all PE is a good class to have in school and should be kept how it is. So peace guys!
Nice post Yusuf, I liked how you listed all of the positives and negatives and backed them up with concrete evidence. But this post was kind of short, wasn't it? Remember, Ms. Lees said at least four paragraphs. One introduction, two body paragraphs, and one conclusion. And also, I believe that you misread the topic. The articles were about if there should be physical education in POST-secondary schools. With adults. Not "kids," and "school kids." But if you just made it a little longer and get the topic right, I think that you'll get some pretty good posts!
ReplyDeleteAlso, maybe you'd like to plan ahead of time, and not write the post at 12:23 AM on a school night. You probably rushed.
ReplyDeleteYusuf, like what Jin said your post is too short and not meeting expectations. Also the introduction is kind of weird since you start the paragraph with "This is a two sided topic for me" but I think you can definatly improve on the introductions. I also think that your sentences are good but you should make some sentences longer. I think you rushed on this post but I think for next time, you should add the sources that you used even if you had sorces from any where else but the internet. If you did more research, I think you could write the paragraphs longer and better. If you want you could always fix these problems and update it. Try to improve Yusuf!!
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