About 901
million people in this world use Facebook very actively. Facebook, Myspace, and Twitter are different kinds
of social networking sites and other sites of this kind of site continue. Is social networking good or bad for us? In
some ways, it can be very helpful and a good way to communicate with people but
however, studies show that social networking sites like Facebook is very
addictive and harmful in many different ways.
Social
networking sites such as Facebook and Myspace made communication a lot
easier. Therefore, many people use these
various sites instead of using the phone because communicating over the phone
is costly. Also, you can ask your
friends about school assignments and talk with different people about
educational topics and learn new things about the world. Also, social networking
sites help low-income kids to become more familiar to computers and technology
which may help in the later life. These
sites also help people to enjoy their time by talking with friends and sharing
ideas without meeting people physically.
Even these
social networking sites have these good and helpful features, it causes lots of
problems. Most common problem is that
these sites have created cyber-bullying. It made some big problem such as committed
suicides, drop in grades, and depression. Also, many people are spending way too much
time on these sites instead of using their precious time that never comes back
in more productive activities such as playing sports. Average teenagers spend about 9 hours per
week on social network sites. When they
are on these sites, they give away personal information, pictures and this is
dangerous because a sexual predator may go after you and your employers could
find bad things about you and you lose your job.
Social
networking sites could very helpful and harmful to you. For example, social networking sites like
Facebook is a great site to communicate about homework and other important
things. However, social networking has
caused many different problems over the years.
It made some people to commit suicide, waste their time, and to lose
their jobs. Therefore, it is your risk
that you are taking so use it right way and keep yourself safe from other
people.
Sources
Much improved William - paragraphing is better and you offer several points with examples to support the varied positions to the question of whether social networking sites are beneficial or harmful. Your wording needs some attention in a few areas (repetition of also as a transition word and some grammatical errors - subj/verb agreement in a few places. You may also wish to rephrase in some places - for example "these sites have created cyber-bullying." Did they really or did the sites help enable or facilitate bullies to remain anonymous online and become even more aggressive in their "attacks" as a result? Your conclusion suggests a similar position - the sites are causing these social problems. Is it the sites that cause them or the users? Is it society that allows these negative uses to continue ? Offering some questions for you to ponder further. Keep up the effort William as it is paying off!
ReplyDeleteI forgot to mention that I need a translator for the chat lingo in your post - I do not understand :(
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